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Chhhhyeah. TPBM likes to sniff coke. :o

I actually understand that. That is really sad. And I DO NOT need to get laid. My love life is rated 16 and up! XD

I like the yoda-ish way of speaking that you use. But I had to re-read the last couple verses before I got them, might wanna rephrase a couple things so ...

Um... Yes? No? I DON'T UNDERSTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND :'( TPBM is a classified DORKWAD.

Yes. SOMEONE CALL PETA! TPBM loves GREEN DAY. Ewwww. :shock:

Okay, there is nothing EMO about Green Day. Even they don't classify themselves as emo, They say they are ALETERNTIVE. Which they are not. DEATH CAB is alternative. Green Day ...

Snip Snip ---> I love scissors. And blood. And one time my friend cut up her arm with a pair of scissors.

HAHA, I love 3 and 6. And also, I TOLD YOU CHOBITS ROCKED! But would you listen? NOOOOOO... I TOLD YOU SO! I TOLD YOU IT ROCKED! Okay. Breathe. I'm ...

She looked up at me, her eyes wide like Anna Marie when she had seen that one butterfly on a flower out in the soccer field while we were at ...

I really like "The dim, cheap light" line. I think that's describing florescent light perfectly

I think that changing the "you's" to "Dani's" would change the story is a worse way, but you could add in the name a couple different places, like when the ...

This entire time I have been obsereving the most odd of all events in the alleged YWS-2. I blink and sort of look down, finally noticing that my arms are ...

WOW, You are really good at art!

:o I think that's a great idea! Too bad i'm not more artistic...

This was odd. I don't exactly see what you are trying to say... like what Shriek said. "...The pain came from everywhere but my ears..." This cracked me up :D